Story of Song
I'm not sure if you have realised it yet
but your music is a story
one your not telling very well
you are seriously better off, finding a peace prize pulitzer award winning new world order plan
and sing it word for word, to the same rythym of previously sung songs
you should also start taking more care of your children, i don't see why you wouldn't sing a
popular children's story to the kids of target age group,
and wait for them to catch on, and reward them as they do
and all the while you are wondering what stop the others get off on this train of nonsense
looking like a shotty conspiracy i call the book of troy
you might want to perhaps spend some time working on your curse that you are worshipping
kane, the first person to ever commit murder
And who knows if you actually put something intelligent into a song
like facts of tried and true healthy routines or ways to do something
you would be much smarter for it
As the deaf muse is forced to live this lie
reality will be forced into change
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