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Story of Song

I'm not sure if you have realised it yet but your music is a story one your not telling very well you are seriously better off, finding a peace prize pulitzer award winning new world order plan and sing it word for word, to the same rythym of previously sung songs you should also start taking more care of your children, i don't see why you wouldn't sing a popular children's story to the kids of target age group, and wait for them to catch on, and reward them as they do and all the while you are wondering what stop the others get off on this train of nonsense looking like a shotty conspiracy i call the book of troy you might want to perhaps spend some time working on your curse that you are worshipping kane, the first person to ever commit murder And who knows if you actually put something intelligent into a song like facts of tried and true healthy routines or ways to do something you would be much smarter for it As the deaf muse is forced to live this lie reality will be forced into change

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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