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You are the story I should write. I've got pages and pages built up inside. I'd start Of course with "Once Upon a time" I had a girl so very fine, who I was proud to be able to call mine. Of course there'd be a chapter with multiple quips of how great it felt to kiss your lips. I'd illustrate it with an atmosphere of how it felt to hold you near, or place my hand upon your thigh, such a thrill one cannot hide. With a plot that twisted and turned the readers would see how my love was soon spurned. I'd end with how you said that you loved me but you lied. Mention all the times you made me feel so bad I wanted to die. On second thought, maybe the story is way too trite so I'll just put down my pen and call it a night.

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Date: 4/13/2024 11:08:00 PM
It's often the case here. It's a good poem.
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Date: 3/21/2024 1:58:00 AM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your poem
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Date: 2/15/2024 6:38:00 PM
Too true to be trite, and to all a goodnight. ~ Finis
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