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Story

You are the story I should write.
I've got pages and pages built up 
inside.
 
I'd start Of course with "Once Upon a 
time" I had a girl so very fine, who 
I was proud to be able to call mine.

Of course there'd be a chapter with 
multiple quips of how great it felt 
to kiss your lips.  

I'd illustrate it with an atmosphere
of how it felt to hold you near, 
or place my hand upon your thigh, 
such a thrill one cannot hide.

With a plot that twisted and turned
the readers would see how my love was 
soon spurned.

I'd end with how you said that you 
loved me but you lied. Mention all the 
times you made me feel so bad I wanted
to die.

On second thought, maybe the story is way 
too trite so I'll just put down my pen and 
call it a night.
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Greenhough Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 11:08 PM
It's often the case here. It's a good poem.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your poem
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Too true to be trite, and to all a goodnight. ~ Finis
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