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Stormy Summer Day Torrential downpours drown this summer day... huge puddles forming, filled with tears of rain. No sun or sky of blue...my heart gives way to sadness while my mood reflects the pain of how a gray and rainy day can bring a sorrow from my heart to hurt anew. Contagious is the dreariness that clings when stormy days bring darkness into view with solemn thoughts of sunshine gone...and, missing you. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: No. 475 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: August 6, 2018 ~6th Place~ Premiere Contest: Summer Rain Storm Sponsor: Dale Gregory Cozart Judged: 07/09/2018 The form required is Spencerian Stanza, consisting of nine lines. The rhyme is ababbcbcc. The first eight lines must be written in iambic pentameter, and the ninth line must be written in iambic hexameter(12 syllables).

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/10/2018 1:23:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you again for your win again! A summer rain poem with great imagery.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/10/2018 2:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 9:17:00 PM

Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! You are truly a wonderful writer ... a treat with every click. :-) <3

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/10/2018 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory, for your very supportive and uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much, my friend! Sandra :) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/7/2018 12:44:00 PM

A poignant picture of how a dark sky can so encompass us in a past sorrow. Masterfully written Sandra! Congratulations on your First Placement! xxoo

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/9/2018 5:52:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie. Yes, gloomy days to affect me that way. I appreciate your lovely comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 8/7/2018 7:41:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/9/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joseph, for your visit and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/7/2018 2:40:00 AM

Funny how we let the weather affect our emotional state. Congratulations on your first place Sandra. Tom

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/6/2018 3:22:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/12/2018 1:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Rnjoyed.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:23:00 PM

A belated thank you, Susan. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra

Brian Densham

Date: 7/10/2018 9:31:00 AM

They way you use the well-worn comparison of rain to tears feels sadly comfortable, like we've been here before. Nice and congratulations!

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:23:00 PM

A belated thank you, Brian! Sandra

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/10/2018 8:39:00 AM

aww the melancholy of rain, beautiful in its own way. :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:22:00 PM

A belated thank you, Casarah! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/10/2018 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations Sandra, your stormy write does captivate xxoo

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:22:00 PM

A belated thank you, Mike! Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2018 6:04:00 PM

I know many feel like this on a rainy day Sandra but the rain brings me joy. I curl up with a good poetry book. Congratulations on your wonderful win on this short list with this moving piece! : )

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2018 4:22:00 PM

A belated thank you, Connie. Hugs, Sandra