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Storms

Vivid lightning flashed, thunder rolled Fascination drew me to see The storm's strength flooded my soul Vivid lightning flashed, thunder rolled Rain poured, water its power extols The creek out of its bank rushed free Vivid lightning flashed, thunder rolled Fascination drew me to see
Written: June 30 and July 1, 2014 Inspired by Shadow Hamilton's contest Contest: Storms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/12/2014 1:28:00 AM
And congrats Sara on yor greater win! Thumbs up. Tak care.
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Date: 7/9/2014 5:19:00 AM
Congrats, Sara. This is a wonderful piece of inspiration!
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Date: 7/7/2014 12:47:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Sara! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:15:00 AM
This is wonderful, Sara! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/5/2014 3:44:00 PM
oh, I can see all this so clearly - awesome
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Date: 7/3/2014 8:16:00 PM
We are having such a drought in California, that I almost wish we could have just one storm like you described!!
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:06:00 AM
Had to be a winner Sara ! Such a great creative piece ,, wonderful imagery ,, perfect form ,, congrats on top place win !
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Date: 7/3/2014 4:00:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Congrats. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 7/2/2014 3:54:00 PM
Storms are indeed fascinating. And can be terrifying. We had Sandy up here. Plenty of damage. I recently purchase of postcards with poems on them. I write regularly for a collectibles magazine - and get paid something(!). Please let me know what you think of my Jewish baseball poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/2/2014 9:17:00 AM
Nice triolet, Sara. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:52:00 AM
Lovely and expressive triolet with great imagery. a worthy winner! congratulations, Sara. // paul
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:30:00 AM
- I see that this is a win poem - well deserved !!! - congratulations, Sarah! - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 3:41:00 AM
And yor stormy poem is fascinating too. Makes me picture it as if right in front of me. And the refrain reads nice too. Tc.
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Date: 7/2/2014 12:09:00 AM
sara, beautiful triolet. Congrats for top win. Mohan
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:06:00 PM
love your triolet Sara.. :D weee each time I read one Im fallling in love with it.. :D BiG KUDOS!!! :D
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:45:00 PM
Great win. I am becoming more and more fascinated with Triolets, might have to give one a try, yours was good :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:39:00 PM
Hi Sara, well done! Congratulations on your richly deserved win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:45:00 PM
Dang, why didn't I do a triolet? I never got around to this one because of time, and it never occurred to me to try a triolet. You are a smart cookie. congrats for your fine win.
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:36:00 PM
congratulations on your win. i love the vivid imagery in the poem. hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:05:00 PM
love your poem Sara congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:04:00 PM
stunning take on the theme, sara.. what a vivid imagery all the way.. huggs
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