Storms

STORMS
As vivid as lightening striking a tree, the storms of life possesses me. My fascination is in my highs and lows. There are no reasons to feel baffled. Once the storm starts, issues will unfold. Your inner being will begin to form. The storms of life define the saddest love. * In a depicter state, she stood. Her body trembles in the multitude. A man from across the room, she found, observed her. She read his lips as he murmured that she had entered the storm. She knew he wondered what her troubles were. She sniffed and said I am in love. The storms of life are an emotional roller coaster. They will bring many hopes and disappointments. Brace yourself for the heights because the rush just may take your life. In a mental-physical world we all live. When your storm hits, be prepared. He depicts his own faith. His keeps his feelings in a mood swing. He is not out to be depleted emotionally. He knows his highs and lows. He capitalizes on his passions. She hears him sigh. This is a sign of the storms of life. He wonders why she stares. She knows that one, within the near future, will defeat his rages and desires. The storms of life to him are a nervous breakdown. Paroxysm is eruditions of the storms of life. A child in famine cries. In a mental-physical world, a humanitarian purpose must thrive. This is because the storms of life are devised. * “Thou I walk in the shadows of death, I fear no evil.” STORMS OF LIFE ___________________________| PENNED ON JUNE 26, 2014!
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Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Way to go with this unique work for the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
Walker  Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Thanks Sara for your support remarks... Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Awesome write Verlena ! Deserved much higher ,, congrats on win !
Walker  Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 1:27 PM
Thanks Upma... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Your poem is amazing, I am glad to read it again. Congratulations on your HM
Walker  Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Rick... HM it is... Verlena
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 8:30 PM
i enjoyed this very much and glad to see it on the list. :) :)
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Casarah for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Sietesantos Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Hi Verlena, congratulations on a wonderful write and fine win! Warmest regards.
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Thanks Pandita for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Hamilton Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 7:15 PM
congrats on HM Verlena hugs
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Thanks Shadow for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:10 AM
I think this is one of your best, I rate it a seven. Your character like all men faces rages and desires, if he does not learn to surrender he will most certainly be consumed. By taking God's hand he will make it through any storm.
Walker  Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Thanks Rick for the supportive remarks and your statement that enlightens my work even more. Verlena
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Such nice movement here through the stanzas, and their different view points. Hey and your the first avatar on the home page as well. You must be busy. Don't forget to tweet link all your poems, I know that you link in your other sites, but why not get this page a little more exposure too?
Walker  Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Thanks Scott for your supportive remarks... Great idea. Well done. Verlena
Devnath  Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:42 PM
I loved the whole theme and loved much the lines "The storms of life are an emotional roller coaster" and "In a mental-physical world, a humanitarian purpose must thrive. This is because the storms of life are devised", where reality bears the same in almost sections of life. Loved always, my poetess friend, bl
Walker  Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Thanks for your supportive remarks BL. Visit me again soon and I will do the same to you... Verlena
Goudreau Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:17 PM
A most powerful read Verlena. Love your metaphors as emotional storms can be devastating. A sad and poignant read. Keep up the great work!
Walker  Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Thanks Suzanne for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:29 PM
This will do really well in the contest love the fact you describe emotional storms not just thunderstorms - very cleverly done Verlena. Hugs jan xxx
Walker  Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Thanks Jan for your support. Cross your fingers that Shadow perception is the same... Verlena :0))s.
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