Notes About The Poem

Sponsor's Name ; Nette Onclaud.             
Contedt Title       ;  Pentastich It.        
Date                   ;  29th Of October 2025 
 


 

 

 

 

Storm Within Me

Shivering,
plagued by a freak storm,
avalanche of angst,
gnawing at my haggard bones,
grim nightmare 

Tossed leaf self,
bold inner tempest,
I might quell, stanch, freeze,
with sheer gumption and stark  brawn,
madcap dream!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Sometimes emotions can play havoc with our minds and bodies. This one is very descriptive of such emotions. At times I feel like that leaf being tossed about by uncertain times. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 9:17 AM
Wow. One of the best I have seen with this title!
Kerr Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Andrea, From you that’s a PREMIERE COMPLIMENT. Many thanks Howard
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