Contest : Pentastitch It, Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud, Dated : October 28, 2025
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Lightning lines in my wrecked psyche spark through gale turned sigh. Whirlwind heaves the shards of dreams in pathos. Gloom within flows with unwept tears, lost in hushed thunder. Frail mind’s fallen sky absorbs silent storm.
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