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Contest : Pentastitch It, Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud, Dated : October 28, 2025

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Storm Within Me


Lightning lines
in my wrecked psyche
spark through gale turned sigh.
Whirlwind heaves the shards of dreams
in pathos.

Gloom within
flows with unwept tears,
lost in hushed thunder.
Frail mind’s fallen sky absorbs
silent storm.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Deep and beautifully written
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Sadly, it was not placed.
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