storm rupture : haiku string
storm outside rattling
solace in another’s hand
r u p t u r e cracking pane ~
lightning flashes pain
no cloud laughing when sky slits
shake smoothie slowly
storm shatters saucer
thicket thunder not blunder
rupture is solace ~
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