Storm Master

Passive in passion, taking in the sweet scent of the bloom
Milks the serenity of an environment, within nature
Rides the ferocious wind that formats the raging ocean

© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bangalee Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 3:18 AM
PASSIVE IN PASSION- wonderful thought
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:08 PM
And another one I had not seen in a while. Sure hoping for a new one from you. It's so good to see new posts from you, my friend.
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June 9, 2010 at 9:53 AM
What an interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the last line. Could even be the start of a new poem. Just a thought. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 8:47 PM
INteresting description, Harry. It takes a calm storm master to ride the ferocious wind! Luv, andrea
Conway Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 1:27 PM
I really enjoyed reading this-Very Cool ~Tirzah~
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June 8, 2010 at 12:43 PM
I like your writings sir. Very nice. Scarlett
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Passive in passion nice alliteration - great images
Knop Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:06 AM
Very imagenary write, enjuyed reading it, Harry! And thank you for your congrats on my win...Gert
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Great descriptive and emotive write that you have penned in this one...This one is close to home and touches me...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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June 8, 2010 at 2:51 AM
Like a hurricane gone bad, sweet ness till it hit the ocean panics. Enjoyed, have awovderful onf,..p.d.
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June 8, 2010 at 2:16 AM
Very creative, Harry. If you truly are a "storm master," I hope you'll keep oil from being spread by hurricanes this season. Quite an engaging sijo! Love, Carolyn
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