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Storm Brings Disaster

This form is called, Laurette.
Love rest on no foundation. It is an endless ocean, with no beginning or end. Rumi    

A raging surf
Pounds the white shore
And the pilings of homes
Collapses one
Gone forever
The shell upon waves roams

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Howard Kerr

March 8, 2025 at 6:17 PM

Sara, Incisive and insightful work. It impacts the senses whilst bringing home the gravity of it all. Thanks for this Howard

Sara Kendrick

March 9, 2025 at 4:18 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Jennifer Proxenos

September 29, 2024 at 8:10 AM

How devastating climate change has been with its incessant global floods, its debilitating heat, earth quakes, lashing hurricanes, disastrous tornadoes , all natural disastrous ten time worse, God is cross, we have not looked after Planet Earth as we should have done. I really enjoyed your poem about Storm brings Disaster, such an eloquent write Sara, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2024 at 8:14 AM

Why, thank you, Jennifer. We have ten years of wet then ten years of drier where I live. It is dependent upon the temperature of the ocean. Sara K

Aurore Severo

September 27, 2024 at 1:10 AM

Lovely poetry, I hope everyone will be safe!

Sara Kendrick

September 27, 2024 at 2:56 AM

Aurore, I can't imagine what those in Florida and South Georgia went through when the hurricane first hit. So far we are okay. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

September 26, 2024 at 7:54 PM

Haunting imagery, Sara. Something about that 'shell roaming' makes me think that it is seeking out its true home. ~ gw

Sara Kendrick

September 27, 2024 at 2:55 AM

I think it could be searching for sure, Gershon. Your visit added a special touch. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

September 26, 2024 at 4:18 PM

One to ponder. Deep and lovely, Sara

Sara Kendrick

September 27, 2024 at 2:54 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

September 26, 2024 at 11:59 AM

What a creative write. So Very True.... Have a fun day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

September 26, 2024 at 1:27 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

September 26, 2024 at 9:38 AM

Interesting form Sara, have often seen houses lose their battle with coastal erosion, heartbreaking to see. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Sara Kendrick

September 26, 2024 at 1:26 PM

Tom, there was a video on the internet that someone filmed of a home losing its footing and ending up being toss by the sea. The article said that at one time there were sand dunes plus sea grass there, but it had slowly been eroded and then there was nothing left to hold the ocean back. Sara K

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