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Storm Brings Disaster

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This form is called, Laurette. Love rest on no foundation. It is an endless ocean, with no beginning or end. Rumi A raging surf Pounds the white shore And the pilings of homes Collapses one Gone forever The shell upon waves roams

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/8/2025 6:17:00 PM

Sara, Incisive and insightful work. It impacts the senses whilst bringing home the gravity of it all. Thanks for this Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2025 4:18:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2024 8:10:00 AM

How devastating climate change has been with its incessant global floods, its debilitating heat, earth quakes, lashing hurricanes, disastrous tornadoes , all natural disastrous ten time worse, God is cross, we have not looked after Planet Earth as we should have done. I really enjoyed your poem about Storm brings Disaster, such an eloquent write Sara, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/29/2024 8:14:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jennifer. We have ten years of wet then ten years of drier where I live. It is dependent upon the temperature of the ocean. Sara K

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/27/2024 1:10:00 AM

Lovely poetry, I hope everyone will be safe!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2024 2:56:00 AM

Aurore, I can't imagine what those in Florida and South Georgia went through when the hurricane first hit. So far we are okay. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/26/2024 7:54:00 PM

Haunting imagery, Sara. Something about that 'shell roaming' makes me think that it is seeking out its true home. ~ gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2024 2:55:00 AM

I think it could be searching for sure, Gershon. Your visit added a special touch. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2024 4:18:00 PM

One to ponder. Deep and lovely, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2024 2:54:00 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/26/2024 11:59:00 AM

What a creative write. So Very True.... Have a fun day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2024 1:27:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/26/2024 9:38:00 AM

Interesting form Sara, have often seen houses lose their battle with coastal erosion, heartbreaking to see. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2024 1:26:00 PM

Tom, there was a video on the internet that someone filmed of a home losing its footing and ending up being toss by the sea. The article said that at one time there were sand dunes plus sea grass there, but it had slowly been eroded and then there was nothing left to hold the ocean back. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 9/26/2024 7:05:00 AM

What an interesting form. And powerful imagery you've created

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2024 8:50:00 AM

Why, thank you, Tom. I thought it was interesting as well, but found it is not so easy to write. Sara K