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Storm Approaches

The light is absorbed within the great wall The darkness fills all that’s here completely The light condenses, becomes the dark call Rain comes crashing in with clouds quite tall There seems to be lots of insanity The light is absorbed within the great wall The wind blows, it whips around on a ball Hopelessness hits a few, fear hits many The light condenses, becomes the dark call It’s so dark, and so slick you sure might fall Sour look is from lack of tranquility The light is absorbed within the great wall Fortress that the storm emits makes you crawl The dark sky makes sure it’s light you can’t see The light condenses, becomes the dark call Storm rages, nothing about this is small Light fades fast within the dark certainly The light is absorbed within the great wall The light condenses, becomes the dark call
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/8/2012 12:19:00 PM
now you have to write here on soup till you expire, russell.. lol!.. where are you??.. missing your words!..:) hugggs!
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Date: 11/8/2012 1:17:00 AM
A poem as it is a clever poet behind - Very well written Russell. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2012 9:54:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this poem. The imagery was amazing. Glad to have found it.
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Date: 11/7/2012 8:26:00 PM
you rockin' roar, russell...this work is riveting and filled with raw energy... the images spring out to assault the senses with fierce and defining phrases.. wow welcome to the world of rhyme... fascinating, my friend!..:) huggs
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