Storm Alert Haiku Number 23

Purple black skies hang
Over mountainous sea's surge
Coastguard hears Mayday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Yes, brings to life the threat of storm. Great haiku. thanks for your comment on my poem. Andrea
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December 23, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Good use of imagery. The last line was a surprise which I liked. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Very impressive write. I hope everyone was alright. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 4:23 PM
sounds ominous, enjoyed reading!1
Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 4:13 PM
very vivid! Light & Love
Mason Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 3:14 PM
WOW ... storm indeed ... love the purple black skies ... and the last line was really a surprise. Wonderful write here, Deirdre !!
Strand Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Love l2 Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Kelly Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Another S O S , Deirdre . Shame On Seán ....
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Deirdre, this is indeed an amazing write. Thank you. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:54 PM
Nice work Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today and for the update info about 'guth'
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October 6, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Good use of imagery to add suspence in this poem. Good ending. Keep on writing. Karen
Owens Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 1:07 PM
I like this. Thanks....Marty
Moreno Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:28 AM
The first and middle line are excellent, nice work Deirdre...Raul
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