Storm

pavillions of gray
camp across the sky waving
banners of rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 1, 2015 at 10:16 AM
I'm intrigued by the three haiku I've read of yours so far, Janet. This one is my favorite. Well painted.... LINDA
Boebert Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, Linda -- I like the rhythm of haiku. I try to do the form justice.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Janet YOUR story is stormy gray and great.
Boebert Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:04 PM
I hope my story isn't too gray or stormy - although it certainly has been in the past. I DO have a liking for storms and rain, though.
Meade Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 3:11 PM
I love a good storm . . . rain washes the air clean . . . let the curtain down. Good visualation.
Boebert Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Yes, yes, and yes. You are an astute reader!
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