Storm

Dark clouds darken sky
Thunder scolds at lightning spears
Nature’s objection

4-18-2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2013 4:36:00 PM
Congrats. With your featured poem *Skat
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Date: 12/26/2011 6:16:00 PM
Back to read some of your poems.. Debra, I'm reading a story to my 7 year old right now... lol... it has no objections to the beauty of nature in it...Very oppositional from your haiku... Thank you for stopping by my work... I' actually took the day off from my Stinky restaurant... Have a nice one..looking forward to ringing in the new year here on the soup... God Bless,..p.d.
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:47:00 AM
Debra good take on nature 's magnetism. Anne
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:07:00 PM
Very good storm haiku!
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:28:00 AM
enjoyed your haiku, take care Debra,...p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:10:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku again Debra. Can't wait to read more from you.
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Date: 4/20/2011 1:32:00 PM
natures objection. or God's? mothers calling. see ya. :) if you think this is an odd comment, you should see it from my point of view. :)
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:16:00 PM
really love this one, can see that dark skey, brings a chill. like that second line, you are a very creative poet keep posting enjoy your work. thank you for commenting on Spring Time Follies.
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Date: 4/20/2011 9:30:00 AM
Hate that kind of weather. Nice write again ;)
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:34:00 PM
srry but im bored
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