Storm

Dark clouds darken sky
Thunder scolds at lightning spears
Nature’s objection

4-18-2011

naturehaiku

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Skat A

January 4, 2013 at 4:36 PM

Congrats. With your featured poem *Skat

Poet Destroyer A

December 26, 2011 at 6:16 PM

Back to read some of your poems.. Debra, I'm reading a story to my 7 year old right now... lol... it has no objections to the beauty of nature in it...Very oppositional from your haiku... Thank you for stopping by my work... I' actually took the day off from my Stinky restaurant... Have a nice one..looking forward to ringing in the new year here on the soup... God Bless,..p.d.

Anne Rutherford

June 12, 2011 at 5:47 AM

Debra good take on nature 's magnetism. Anne

Bonchance Longfall

April 27, 2011 at 1:07 PM

Very good storm haiku!

Poet Destroyer A

April 26, 2011 at 11:28 AM

enjoyed your haiku, take care Debra,...p.d.

Matt Hunt

April 21, 2011 at 9:10 PM

Wonderful Haiku again Debra. Can't wait to read more from you.

Robert Johnson

April 20, 2011 at 1:32 PM

natures objection. or God's? mothers calling. see ya. :) if you think this is an odd comment, you should see it from my point of view. :)

James Foulk

April 20, 2011 at 12:16 PM

really love this one, can see that dark skey, brings a chill. like that second line, you are a very creative poet keep posting enjoy your work. thank you for commenting on Spring Time Follies.