Storm

the sunny disposition ~ couldn’t conceal the raging storm within 













Contest: Mono- O
Sponsor: Brain Strand
11/12/2020

depressionmonoku

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2020 10:22:00 AM

Oh! I love the contrast of light and dark emotions, Alexis. Your artistic pen spills awesome ink, dear poetess. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/17/2020 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations for this great poem Alexis :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Alexis :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Al Juman

Date: 11/16/2020 3:41:00 PM

very true--no fable --nice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/16/2020 10:30:00 AM

Such a clever Monoku - I love it Alexis - many people have their happy face and then when alone go back to their miserable, arrogant selves, so angry with life, they could even commit suicide. Well penned my dear friend.. Blessings and hus, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 3:21:00 PM

I love this kind of imagery, Alexis. Way to go in the contest.

John Watt

Date: 11/14/2020 6:09:00 PM

Many around us have a storm raging within that we don't know about until we get to know them. Wise words, Alexis. Congrats on your win ~ John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2020 2:01:00 PM

Whoa!! I would not delight in knowing this person. Congrats on your win. Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 11:51:00 AM

Being in touch with the storm can bring back the smile. Your touch on this situation with a transparent honesty, Alexis. Congratulations on your win.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/14/2020 9:15:00 AM

Hi Alexis great imagery here, can be construed in so many ways, well done on your winning placement cheers David

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/14/2020 8:21:00 AM

You're so right. A troubled person cannot fool others with a mask--not for long anyway. CONGRATS, Alexis! Janice