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Stopped in our tracks

It's all fun and games
Suddenly that heart stopping gut wrenching feeling
~ We are out of moves



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Yep, the run out; nothing is forever on this planet. well penned.
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Exactly, nothing lasts forever, ML.
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 4:12 PM
sad one Line - ... and if you get ill the medics all want their 'cheque mate':-( hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 4:51 PM
O yes, where is that cheque, mate?! Thanks for your visit, Jan.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:21 PM
sad one, Line. I can see one more today . Hope to catch up on your other recent ones later this week.
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much for following me, Andrea. Most appreciated.
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