Stopped At the Gates Preterition

Pearly gates god waits
Sara, all that booze and men 
you cannot come in 



comp entry 08042016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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May 21, 2016 at 11:23 AM
many thanks , hope everything works out thanks for running the c omp stephen
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