Nicole Sharon Brown Poet Rhyme

Stop the Acid Attacks (Message To Hong Kong)

Man, whoever you, are stop the acid attacks.
God never intended us,
To use our chemical knowledge like that.
What you are doing is wrong,
Strong acids are corrosive, explosive, and deadly.
This action scares the hell out of me.
People are running around town,
Screaming and burning,
Because you’re mad,
That is awful and sad.
That is just so inhumane and wrong.
You go to college to enhance your knowledge,
And then do evil things,
Adding a demonic disaster to someone’s dreams.
This act is mean,
Stop the acid attacks,
Acid can remove someone’s skin right off the bat.
Gosh, this is wrong!
Please stop the acid attacks in Hong Kong.


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Jared Pickett January 15, 2010 at 10:52 AM Nice... You are full of wisdom today.... Great write friend.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2010 at 6:07 AM This is interesting info. I will have to look it up. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire January 15, 2010 at 5:53 AM Nicole, I'm behind you 100% in your message here and I wish those who have the power to stop the "acid attacks" could read this poem. Powerful! Love, Carolyn