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Stop spinning

My mind spinning around Just like a fast merry-go-round. The same screaming in my head but Not making any sound. Trying to open my eyes but the spinning Makes me sick. So every time I open my eyes I have to Shut them quick. Spinning even faster now I cannot catch My breath. How do I stop this spinning that just might Cause my death. To stop this constant spinning a breath I Must take. I understand that the breath of life Will activate my brake.

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Date: 12/12/2023 4:47:00 PM
true, our self survival kicks in when one creates a constantly spinning world for themselves, a world that they assume is out of their control?
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