Stop Drinking!

Why would you choose 
To use the booze?

All it does is confuse
And your brain you willl misuse!

It pulls you down
Inside you will frown

So do your best
And let God do the rest!

(Never drank but thought it up somehow!) :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 4:19 PM
This would be wonderful for AA meetings. I love it. It is great!
Benton Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Hi Joshua Lacey; My compliments, on your poem; STOP DRINKING. Keep up the good work. Gloria Benton
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