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Stop, Breathe, Goodbye

I'm pulled from the water but I can’t breathe. I can’t wake up, I'm lifeless, but I feel free. Stop Breathe The one thing I can do right is taken away so fast. The people I loved most have disappeared at last. Stop Breathe Why are the tears I cry made of blood so red? Could it be, my dream has come. Am I finally dead? Stop Breathe Die I feel nothing, but I feel pain. I wish that I could wake up again. Stop Breathe out Cry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to the people I loved the most. Stop Breathe Goodbye

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Date: 6/5/2016 10:29:00 PM
Very Intense piece with deep emotions a perfect 7 Feel free to check out my piece titled Afterlife.
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:45:00 PM
A poem of moments suffused with intense emotions....
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