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Stones

I walked on stones I could feel them beneath my feet The present moment slipped away As if nothing is concrete I felt I was in a daze Caught in a trap time created Where were the answers? In all that has been slated? So much work through the years A goal not many understood Filters slowly through my mind If I could explain, I would The complexity of life has no limits Puzzles, many puzzles left incomplete Memories pass by in many pieces Scattered like stones, on the side of the street Heidi Sands 6/5/18

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Date: 6/8/2018 2:46:00 PM
This is done perfectly! True art! You are truly, truly gifted
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Kale. Very much appreciated! :)
Date: 6/5/2018 4:11:00 PM
"Such an amazing rhyme, Heidi.. I can really relate to this poem.. Penned so perfectly! Best wishes to you.."
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Robertina. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 6/5/2018 2:42:00 PM
Lovely, I'm traveling along side you
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Tim! :)
Date: 6/5/2018 1:49:00 PM
This piece speaks to me, lovely done Heidi :) xomo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 2:44:00 PM
That is nice to hear. Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 6/5/2018 11:17:00 AM
I like how you tied in the stones at the end...Very nicely penned Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/5/2018 10:57:00 AM
Puzzles indeed Heidi, well done...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)

Book: Shattered Sighs