Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Stones

I walked on stones
I could feel them beneath my feet
The present moment slipped away
As if nothing is concrete

I felt I was in a daze
Caught in a trap time created
Where were the answers?
In all that has been slated?

So much work through the years
A goal not many understood
Filters slowly through my mind
If I could explain, I would

The complexity of life has no limits
Puzzles, many puzzles left incomplete
Memories pass by in many pieces
Scattered like stones, on the side of the street

Heidi Sands

6/5/18

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Kale Brereton June 8, 2018 at 2:46 PM This is done perfectly! True art! You are truly, truly gifted Heidi Sands June 8, 2018 at 2:51 PM Thank you for your kind comments Kale. Very much appreciated! :)

Robertina B. June 5, 2018 at 4:11 PM "Such an amazing rhyme, Heidi.. I can really relate to this poem.. Penned so perfectly! Best wishes to you.." Heidi Sands June 5, 2018 at 4:12 PM Thank you Robertina. I appreciate your comment :)

Tim Smith June 5, 2018 at 2:42 PM Lovely, I'm traveling along side you Heidi Sands June 5, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you Tim! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 5, 2018 at 1:49 PM This piece speaks to me, lovely done Heidi :) xomo Heidi Sands June 5, 2018 at 2:44 PM That is nice to hear. Thank you Maureen :)

Joseph May June 5, 2018 at 11:17 AM I like how you tied in the stones at the end...Very nicely penned Heidi Heidi Sands June 5, 2018 at 11:31 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Charlie Smith June 5, 2018 at 10:57 AM Puzzles indeed Heidi, well done... Heidi Sands June 5, 2018 at 11:31 AM Thank you Charlie :)