Stoned

Elemental dissonance

Poly-plated string guess

Depressive spine edge

Identity description cubed

Waterfalls negative score

Abyssal language drops


Hole numeral planification

Horizontal ship oval dust

Sea’s sloped gravitational

Octagon growth


Lack of facts and matter

Undertone course kaleidoscope

Particular perimeter blast

Empty can tomatoes

Protostar geometric syndrome

Indifferent neurotransmission

Necrotic wavelength voice

Breakfast experience lost



[Stone…stone…stone…stone…]

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Date: 11/16/2009 2:30:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. I can almost hear that "Necrotic wavelength voice." Much for the reader to think about. Like Ruben, I read this a few times. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments. Karen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/29/2009 4:44:00 PM

Dear Cesar, please put also a Spanish poem on soup as I kno well some members would like it. In case you could just print also the English translation. Poetry must be international, I guess. Pienso que a algunas miembros del soup le guastarán leer poemas en castellano. I have been to Wellawatte, a beach near Colombo ein Ceylon where Pablo Neruda once "caminó come embajador de Chile". Muchos saluos my amigo from Germany... Y que tengas gracias por tus comentarios! Chao, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/27/2009 10:20:00 PM

Wow, Cesar, truely stoned!!! Great experience. Do you speak Spnish too? If so could you also write a poem in Spanish? Would like to read it. And thanks for your comments....Gert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2009 4:43:00 PM

hmmm jumble it all up and make an ABC verse out of it too? Some loverly poem titles above! "Indifferent neurotransmission" great line! Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/22/2009 2:30:00 PM

Wow... The title is hurting. Stanza amazing. When the world imposes a new humanitarian order following 2012's surprises... would not experience the lost person at breakfast because only purist civilization will reign blissfully. Keep writing. All the best.