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the sun threw a sidearm ray that bounced off the surface many-times~ sank before making the bay 7-9-7 syllable count

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Date: 3/20/2021 5:17:00 AM
bravo ~ a FAVE
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Date: 7/13/2020 1:23:00 AM
Love the image
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Date: 6/25/2020 2:12:00 PM
WOW! Now I am scared because this haiku right here, is worthy of the price... Great Haiku.
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Date: 6/22/2020 6:28:00 AM
I like rhyme in Haiku Eve,photos like this are poetically inspirational to me Thanks
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Date: 6/21/2020 6:40:00 PM
Wonderful haiku Eve, love it
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Date: 6/21/2020 4:03:00 PM
It usually does that just before striking a girl in a bikini . . .Nicely caught! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/21/2020 6:10:00 AM
Striking image made more vivid by your evocative words - impressive in their simplicity. Well observed and described, Eve.
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Date: 6/21/2020 6:10:00 AM
Striking image made more vivid by your evocative words - impressive in their simplicity. Well observed and described, Eve.
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Date: 6/21/2020 2:35:00 AM
sidearm ray.........excellent
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:34:00 AM
Wow.. Wonderful Haiku.. Great write Eve..
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