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Stone Skimming

the sun threw a sidearm ray
that bounced off the surface many-times~
sank before making the bay


7-9-7 syllable count
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 5:17 AM
bravo ~ a FAVE
Milgate Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 1:23 AM
Love the image
Makama Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:12 PM
WOW! Now I am scared because this haiku right here, is worthy of the price... Great Haiku.
Strand Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 6:28 AM
I like rhyme in Haiku Eve,photos like this are poetically inspirational to me Thanks
May Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Wonderful haiku Eve, love it
Leffanta Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 4:03 PM
It usually does that just before striking a girl in a bikini . . .Nicely caught! Aloha! Rico
Brewer Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Striking image made more vivid by your evocative words - impressive in their simplicity. Well observed and described, Eve.
Brewer Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Striking image made more vivid by your evocative words - impressive in their simplicity. Well observed and described, Eve.
Bangalee Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:35 AM
sidearm ray.........excellent
Somadas Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Wow.. Wonderful Haiku.. Great write Eve..
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