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Stone Mountain

At the base of Stone Mountain in early spring, the view is overpowered by the height of the round rock. Gray cold granite exposed rock draws many visitors to view this unusual phenomenon.
cold massive hugh stone obstructs view for several miles white narcissus bloom
Climbing onto the sky lift, we inch to the top. At the top of Stone Mountain, we can see for miles around. The beauty of spring is exhibited in the different shades of green on the trees' leaves. A sprinkling of white dots the forest as Dogwoods bloom. Haibun form..

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Date: 1/23/2013 4:19:00 PM
you did beautifully in this challenge, sara.
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:20:00 PM
Sara, miss reading your poems... a beautiful poem... glad i made time to read this one and the one for my contest...xox~PD
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:44:00 PM
This is a delightful and enlightening write my friend! I truly enjoyed this interesting subject that you have chosen, very creative in your approach as well! I truly loved reading this fascinating poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:28:00 PM
This is a good poem and an interesting style you have come up with - JH
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:13:00 PM
Ahhhh a new form for me to learn... I love the words and style you come up with... xoox Michael
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:12:00 PM
We climbed to the top also.the statue gave the feeling of awe. And what is a day with out the light show? I'll call when I get there.
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