Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Stone Mountain

At the base of Stone Mountain in early spring, the view is overpowered by the height of the round rock. Gray cold granite exposed rock draws many visitors to view this unusual phenomenon.

 cold massive hugh stone  
obstructs view for several miles
white narcissus bloom

Climbing onto the sky lift, we inch to the top. At the top of Stone Mountain, we can see for miles around. The beauty of spring is exhibited in the different shades of green on the trees' leaves. A sprinkling of white dots the forest as Dogwoods bloom.  

Haibun form..

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2013 at 4:19 PM you did beautifully in this challenge, sara.

Poet Destroyer A January 21, 2013 at 3:20 PM Sara, miss reading your poems... a beautiful poem... glad i made time to read this one and the one for my contest...xox~PD

Russell Sivey January 21, 2013 at 1:44 PM This is a delightful and enlightening write my friend! I truly enjoyed this interesting subject that you have chosen, very creative in your approach as well! I truly loved reading this fascinating poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Honestly J.T. January 21, 2013 at 1:28 PM This is a good poem and an interesting style you have come up with - JH

Michael J. Falotico January 21, 2013 at 1:13 PM Ahhhh a new form for me to learn... I love the words and style you come up with... xoox Michael

The Situation January 21, 2013 at 1:12 PM We climbed to the top also.the statue gave the feeling of awe. And what is a day with out the light show? I'll call when I get there.