Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Stone Ages

.                                                 in mortar of stones 

                             silent masquerades revealed…

                   recessed yesterdays

                              ..........

                the day leans heavy

                upon contemplation….

                thoughts flow as rivers

                              ...........


   breezes meander

           through castles of reflection....

                           a tiptoe through dreams





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By Carrie Richards, for Michael's "Your Thoughts" Contest

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Line Gauthier April 16, 2018 at 8:28 PM Beautiful imagery, Carrie.

Sara Kendrick June 20, 2011 at 1:16 PM Creative work..Congrats...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2011 at 7:45 PM Just lovely how you went from stone to flowing rivers and then to dreams like breezes. Congrats on a beautiful win.

Gwendolen Song May 22, 2011 at 2:23 PM Congrats on this high marking win, Carrie. Castles of reflection and tippytoeing through dreams seem so magical. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire May 22, 2011 at 12:16 PM A dreamy haiku that flows so well, Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet May 22, 2011 at 8:55 AM Excellent presentation here.Congrats Carrie on your win..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 8:13 AM Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write .. enjoy another special win with luv... always..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 22, 2011 at 8:04 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, Carrie

Jack Horne May 22, 2011 at 7:07 AM Many congrats on your win : )

Dr.Ram Mehta May 7, 2011 at 1:58 PM Lovely read of the picture with a nice perspective, Carrie

Sara Kendrick May 7, 2011 at 1:34 PM Interesting thoughts that you penned..Reads like winning material..Good luck ..Like your style..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire May 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM A breathtaking approach to Michael's contest, Carrie. You succeeded in combining the thoughts with the "nature" elements required for a haiku so well. Also wanted to ask you if you watched "As the World Turns." Saw your comment on Eileen Fulton (Lisa). I think she spent nearly her whole life on that show. My world stopped turning when they pulled the plug on this soap. Watched it for decades! Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 12:57 PM Wonderful Carrie, life and its moments... no way around it.. enjoyed your haiku... Also have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY.. take care,..p.d.