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Stolen Time

Snow sneaks just in time Fills the ground with softy white While sun is asleep

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Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2008 8:35:00 PM

Teresita - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/23/2008 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Love, Nigel

John Heck

Date: 12/22/2008 11:25:00 PM

Dear Teresita - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/22/2008 7:02:00 PM

So beautiful! Congratulations on your win in the Winter Solstice contest! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2008 6:01:00 PM

This is soft and sweet, and I love it. A winner and so well deserved to be among the contest winning poems!! Congratulations, and Happy Holidays! Carrie

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/5/2008 3:35:00 PM

A beautiul Haiku. I enjoyed the painted picture of early morning snow. Also congrats on your poem Night being featured this week. I could not locate the title in your list of poems. You may ask PoetrySoup to rectify. -Mohammad

Deneen White

Date: 10/31/2008 3:07:00 PM

the metaphor in this write paints a vivid picture, take care D-nyce

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/30/2008 7:08:00 AM

Excellent haiku - Nothing like waking to freshly falling snow - God Bless

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/30/2008 5:12:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Teresita. Thanks for your much appreciated comments. Love, Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/29/2008 6:32:00 PM

A perfect little Haiku! Speaks softly! Nice one! ~ Carrie