Stolen Time

Snow sneaks just in time
Fills the ground with softy white
While sun is asleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 8:35 PM
Teresita - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ
Fawcett Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Love, Nigel
Heck Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 11:25 PM
Dear Teresita - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:02 PM
So beautiful! Congratulations on your win in the Winter Solstice contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 6:01 PM
This is soft and sweet, and I love it. A winner and so well deserved to be among the contest winning poems!! Congratulations, and Happy Holidays! Carrie
Yamin Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:35 PM
A beautiul Haiku. I enjoyed the painted picture of early morning snow. Also congrats on your poem Night being featured this week. I could not locate the title in your list of poems. You may ask PoetrySoup to rectify. -Mohammad
White Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 3:07 PM
the metaphor in this write paints a vivid picture, take care D-nyce
Jordan Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 7:08 AM
Excellent haiku - Nothing like waking to freshly falling snow - God Bless
Fawcett Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 5:12 AM
Lovely Haiku Teresita. Thanks for your much appreciated comments. Love, Nigel
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 6:32 PM
A perfect little Haiku! Speaks softly! Nice one! ~ Carrie
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