Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

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Stolen By the Moon -- Andaree

Twilight on the ocean was as blue as steel.
Caressed by the sun, one touch would feel
a soft trace of liquid gold.
With a storm foretold,
the wind grows
cold.
The moon rose,
to watch waves unfold,
over the sea, uncontrolled.
Lightning appears, but the moon reveals
golden glints of jewel tones as the thunder peals


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10/13/15
Submitted for Andrea's Contest: "Andaree Contest #II"

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Skat A October 21, 2015 at 9:38 PM Carrie, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Sandra Haight October 18, 2015 at 4:57 PM Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Wished I had read this sooner too. Still love your exquisite W9imagery. Congrats! Sandra

Jan Allison October 18, 2015 at 3:11 PM Oh Carrie I wish I'd read this before the contest closed it is so beautiful and would have placed very highly:-( hugs jan xx Carrie Richards October 18, 2015 at 3:16 PM Thank you, Jan. My own fault for not going back and re-checking the form !! Not the first boo-boo I've made !! LOL !!

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2015 at 9:17 PM Oh my. I wish someone had told you the first and last lines were not the same. This is so beautiful, carrie. sorry it's only HM Carrie Richards October 18, 2015 at 9:46 AM Akkkk!! Somehow I forgot about that requirement!! Oh Boo on me !! LOL !! Not the first time I messed up !!! :(

John Fleming October 13, 2015 at 2:14 PM Very nice, Carrie! If I was judging the contest this would be, at the very least, a front runner! My best regards! :) john P.s A Seven!