Stirring August Eyes

Snow flake petals swirl in amber half-light
stirring august eyes with pristine colour 
early bird’s panoramic tone poem chant
basking in the verdant glades at sunrise

Basking in the verdant glades at sunrise 
early bird’s panoramic tone poem chant
stirring august eyes with pristine colour 
snow flake petals swirl in amber half-light 


Date submitted : 12th January 2021

            Contest : Podium Placing Promise (7)

          Sponsor : Brian Strand 

NB This is an eight line mirror image poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. A very creative one penned. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 7:11 AM
I appreciate those comments of yours, Sara. Thanks for your time
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