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Stir the Air

Take a spoon and stir the air What pollutants do you find there Your fence is rotting, pull out a stake Now it's got a huge toothache Pull down a rake and comb your lawn Which side is the part on In your sidewalk, count the cracks Step in one, get dog-doo back Climb your steps and ring the bell It's out-of-order, what the hell

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Date: 12/17/2021 8:10:00 AM
This poem fairly prances in a jazzy way
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Date: 12/9/2021 5:51:00 AM
So much for a calming walk outdoors! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2021 3:57:00 PM
Alas, walking is so 20th-century. lol. ~ Droidman
Date: 12/8/2021 10:34:00 AM
You must have been reading about the U S Navy providing drinking water tainted with jet fuel to the military to commemorate 07.XII.41?
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Date: 12/8/2021 7:29:00 AM
In your sidewalk, count the cracks Step in one, get dog-doo back…the Gershon Comedy Hour
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Date: 12/8/2021 2:41:00 PM
Tune in any time my Comedy Hour, sponsored by The Good Humor Man...
Date: 12/7/2021 10:56:00 PM
Just having one heck of a messed-up day, eh? Great fun reading this Gershon!!...ab
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Date: 12/8/2021 7:38:00 PM
That's it, Anselmo! Just 'one heck of a messed-up day.' So why does this happen every day to me?! lol. :) gw
Date: 12/7/2021 9:20:00 PM
Enjoyed it immensely, gw. Funny. Your sense of humor was shining out here when you wrote these lines!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/8/2021 2:04:00 PM
Humor? Me? You must have confused with me with my twin brother. ~ Deadly Serious

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