Stint Five

...in this land, we lived 
to see pharaoh and stars
in their origin...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 3, 2015 at 11:50 PM
enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 11:47 PM
I LIKES this!!! LIke Carrie says, it has a great feeling of the past.
Oyewole Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 7:29 AM
Thanks for commenting... Sill don't get this "feeling of the past"?
Richards Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Oh, this is beautiful!! so unique in feeling of the past!! Nicely done!!
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