Afolabi Muideen Poet Rhyme

Stimulant

Feeling I got so doubtless
Which absorb me as delicious
Which I belief one can't do sans
It has helped me a lot of times
Passion             for        progress
How would success comes one's means
Sans this feeling so immense
How would one pursue great things
Sans  this   feelings     so  immense  
Outweigh only inflicts mind and sense
Which might spit venomous abscess
As    the   Mozanbique    spits   its
Venom. I greedily read some poets
who their works seem voluptuous
As  cute stuffs in elegant dresses
Which often drag me to put more effects
Upon              my                  process
Passion is a stimulant that empowers or gears
A person toward great things
Of this Mother earth and of Holy place
However it depends on how its get one's hands.


9/8/2015



Note: for a person to have the right hand of the Might or the other, he needs passion to imitate either  HIS Prophets deeds or other prophets.

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Paul Callus November 16, 2015 at 9:30 AM Stimulation helps us to get on, and to better what we do or aim to achieve in life. Reading the work of others can inspire us to raise our level. The world we live in and the One who created it both fill us with passion. Regards // paul

Scott Thirtyseven September 9, 2015 at 7:22 AM I love the idea of poems being voluptuous. Great words my friend.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2015 at 11:48 PM yes, yes, Afolabi. Passion for one's life and one's work is EVERYTHING. Great topic you discussed with your poem, my friend.

Robert Lindley September 8, 2015 at 10:44 PM I see a true poet writing from the heart.. Life beats us and later if we are lucky it treats us. Hold the hope my friend. Keep on writing and someday , the sun will shine and the sky shout out -- you are free to live yet again! A solid 7 on this deep and intense poem.

Poet Destroyer A September 8, 2015 at 8:20 PM Afolabi, this is well said.. Thanks for sharing these emotions with us. Each line seems to come deep from within you.... Linda

Demetrios Trifiatis September 8, 2015 at 5:24 AM My friend, A.M., I do not perceive you as jealous of other's successes. Jealousy, as I understand it, has negative connotations therefore it would be better to find a more appropriate word, with positive denotation. Yes, your message is clear that is why I say "Jealousy" doesn't fit. A very good idea developed that passes a message! Afolabi Muideen September 8, 2015 at 10:10 AM Thank you very much dear poet I appreciate your hand. You see I tend to know that word until I lost within, but thanks you found me before I go beyond. I have done some changes hope it's okay... Bless.......A.M.

Michael Tor September 8, 2015 at 2:18 AM Nice effort Afolabi Afolabi Muideen September 8, 2015 at 9:17 AM Thank you very much for your comment......A.M.