Heidi Sands Poet Haiku

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Stillness

Photo of Lilies that I took and thanks to Sandra Weiss for framing it :)

               still summer air
         orange Lilies standing tall
             no movement at all

Heidi Sands

7/10/19

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David William Breidenthal August 2, 2019 at 7:02 AM Beautiful and precious poem ! Heidi Sands August 2, 2019 at 7:27 AM Thank you J.W. :)

Paul Callus July 13, 2019 at 9:43 AM I can visualize this, and i can also feel the calm of this summer day, Heidi. Regards // paul Heidi Sands July 13, 2019 at 3:16 PM Nice to hear that Paul. Thank you :)

Kai Michael Neumann July 11, 2019 at 2:05 PM Nice one. Here it is: Humid and hot sweat dripping from moist skins - wet paradise. Kind wishes, Kai Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 3:20 PM Thank you Kai. Stay cool somehow :)

Jennifer Proxenos July 11, 2019 at 1:36 PM A perfect image portrayed by this haiku by the stillness of the atmosphere, nothing moves, not even the lilies. Creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 3:20 PM Thank you very much Jennifer :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 11, 2019 at 10:52 AM Perfect imagery of stillness dearest, Heidi! Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 12:45 PM Thank you Demetrios :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy July 11, 2019 at 10:15 AM Lovely lilies! Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 12:45 PM Thank you Abdullah :)

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2019 at 9:01 PM I see the lilies standing stock still, just as you've drawn it up... Nicely imaged... I like that you rhymed this haiku as well. Best wishes, gw Heidi Sands July 11, 2019 at 8:52 AM Thank you Gershon. I am happy you can see the image. I have a line of orange Lilies blooming along the side of my house :)