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Stilled Life

STILLED  LIFE
an enormous
  symphony
fading
  dying
mirrored

to pause
&
reflect
in
complete
 isolation
in
a
symbolic
tangled
  wasteland
a
restful
gaze
upon
  intense
reality


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 9/30/2022 6:17:00 AM
Brian, your ideas are really insightful and morally superior. This is the strength that comes from having a mature soul.
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