Still, You Feel I Am Alive :: Luc Bat
You walked in woods with gun.
Oh! must be a great fun; yes it
was, but tiger came; quit
no, I couldn't; I freeze; It stared at
me. You should've fired; that
is right; but I couldn't; gat fell down
It acted fast, no frown.
As it came near, I's brown; cede gun.
~x~
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