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Still Waiting

frozen and alone still clutching her phone awaiting an ambulance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/21/2023 11:55:00 AM
Enjoyed ver much. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/29/2023 2:20:00 AM
Powerful and sad in so few words Peter! Debx
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Date: 4/27/2023 8:58:00 AM
Pure irony, Peter: To die clutching a life line that fails you. SuZ
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:03:00 AM
So sad & so true. Three lines telling it how it is Peter. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/27/2023 5:58:00 AM
This is a bit heart wrenching Peter, times are bad at the moment
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Peter Rees
Date: 4/27/2023 6:51:00 AM
Yes indeed. Not a happy little ditty, but these things are happening ever more frequently.

Book: Shattered Sighs