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Still Waiting

frozen and alone
still clutching her phone
awaiting an ambulance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Faure Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Enjoyed ver much. Thanks for sharing
M  Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 2:20 AM
Powerful and sad in so few words Peter! Debx
Delaney Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Pure irony, Peter: To die clutching a life line that fails you. SuZ
Radice Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:03 AM
So sad & so true. Three lines telling it how it is Peter. Cheers - Gary
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