Still the Birds Sing

Moving forward and through Steady grief rocked by shock Warped is the view Each moment now clocked Yet there is beauty Still the birds sing Waves keep on crashing Do Not Pity Me Strange though it sounds My perception is blessed My soul has connections I send in requests I know we're all heard I know we're all worthy I know we're all guided It's a classroom; a journey I'll align with the beauty And hear the birds sing Ride the waves as they're crashing Do Not Pity Me

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Mona Karaki

Date: 2/3/2015 10:26:00 AM

May the birds always sing for you dear!!

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/3/2015 3:48:00 PM

Here's hopin'! : )

Mona Karaki

Date: 2/3/2015 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful inspirational and simply written. Allow me pls to share it on facebook with my friends on my page . Thank you

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/3/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words. So glad you enjoyed ... I enjoyed yours as well. Welcome to the Soup! Enjoy!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 10:05:00 AM

Loved and enjoyed your poem. Thank you Jean grand poème>Your friend rajat

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 1/21/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed AND then took the time to leave this lovely comment!! : )

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/21/2015 8:06:00 AM

Bravo! A very uplifting start to my day! It all comes down to a positive outlook! Hugs, Jack xxx

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 1/21/2015 12:25:00 PM

Thanks! Yes, a positive outlook - and a sense of humor - help! : ) Enjoy your day!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/20/2015 6:57:00 PM

I had to smile at your third stanza. I enjoyed the beauty of your poem and your outlook on the situation. This is lovely Jean. A big welcome to Poetry Soup! Aloha, Connie

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 1/21/2015 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, Connie! : )

Darkland Poetry

Date: 1/18/2015 11:24:00 AM

This is beautiful. I really enjoyed it. :) Just change your "their" in the last stanza to "they're".

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 1/18/2015 1:41:00 PM

Thank you ... and thanks for the heads up!!! : )