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Still Summertime

Waves are crashing onto the shore as another boat drifts by The clouds hang high overhead as if suspended in time People everywhere as far as the eye can see walking through the park or along the waterfront Happy faces, smiling children by their sides skipping along carefree in the sunshine The seagulls give a beckon call as they glide across the sky Summertime is still ever present, even though fall is very near 8/1510

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Date: 9/9/2010 2:53:00 PM
A refreshing look of summer's end, and changing seasons. "skipping along carefree... sounds unbeatable and genuine to the eye. Thanks. Jan
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Date: 9/8/2010 11:33:00 AM
Nice way to prolong the summer feel.
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Date: 8/19/2010 11:02:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one. I love summer and I like when it lingers and does not give in yet to fall! you captured that well. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:14:00 AM
I love the cold weather.. can't wait til the summer is over. Enjoyed this interesting piece of poetry you have written here. Also, will have to read more of your work as well. Have a great day.
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:31:00 PM
Written beautifully i can just picture he seagulls gliding across the sky : )
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Reminds me of the time of vacation with beach fun...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog with encouraging words..Sara
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