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Still Stays Pretty

She started to look white and pale As snow and darkness started to prevail Nothing again could ever be heard Not a soft sound or a single word. When death does come what shall I do? Had given her all of my love so true In future many things will still find But I had to leave my love behind. To me her death had never been Some day soon will see her again While my love for her on earth still will last Face still stays pretty even if in the past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/3/2014 7:30:00 PM
Fine romantic couplet here. Memories can sustain us! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/26/2014 12:46:00 PM
Hi James. I just want to express my heartfelt thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem in the past. Hope you are keeping well.
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:54:00 PM
You sure do James, thank you for the visit, LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:39:00 AM
James, a forever pretty face. A beautiful true piece. Lasting love... Beautiful deep imagery,... Linda
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James Horn
Date: 5/25/2014 6:55:00 PM
You always have such an elegant way of putting things. Thanks Linda. Do you know what Linda in Spanish means?

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