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Still Stays Pretty

She started to look white and pale 
As snow and darkness started to prevail
Nothing again could ever be heard
Not a soft sound or a single word. 

When death does come what shall I do? 
Had given her all of my love so true 
In future many things will still find 
But I had to leave my love behind. 

To me her death had never been 
Some day soon will see her again 
While my love for her on earth still will last 
Face still stays pretty even if in the past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anish Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Fine romantic couplet here. Memories can sustain us! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Mohammed Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Hi James. I just want to express my heartfelt thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem in the past. Hope you are keeping well.
A   Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 9:54 PM
You sure do James, thank you for the visit, LINDA
A   Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 8:39 AM
James, a forever pretty face. A beautiful true piece. Lasting love... Beautiful deep imagery,... Linda
Horn Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 6:55 PM
You always have such an elegant way of putting things. Thanks Linda. Do you know what Linda in Spanish means?
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