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Still Standing Still

Lost in a thought,
A mind set to jot.

To enter a trance,
No movement - a stance.

No trace of a laugh,
A blank photograph. 

Dots are connected,
A vision infected.

A stare into space,
Still standing in place. 

Making no sound,
Lost and then found. 

Six senses attack,
The world has come back. 

- Yours Truly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 2:20 AM
- A poem that was pleasant to read - well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Clever piece that talks of standing still but moves quickly. Well done. Welcome to the soup
A  Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 10:13 PM
I'm going to connect all your dots one of these days. :-) I'm glad you are now in your sense. I Don't want to see you fall. JOKE :-) ~*~SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Enjoyed reading your very unique work..Sara
Truly Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Thanks Sara :) ill be sure to read through some of your many poems I see you've written. - Yours Truly
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