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Still Standing Still

Lost in a thought, A mind set to jot. To enter a trance, No movement - a stance. No trace of a laugh, A blank photograph. Dots are connected, A vision infected. A stare into space, Still standing in place. Making no sound, Lost and then found. Six senses attack, The world has come back. - Yours Truly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/3/2013 2:20:00 AM
- A poem that was pleasant to read - well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:21:00 PM
Clever piece that talks of standing still but moves quickly. Well done. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:13:00 PM
I'm going to connect all your dots one of these days. :-) I'm glad you are now in your sense. I Don't want to see you fall. JOKE :-) ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very unique work..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2013 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Sara :) ill be sure to read through some of your many poems I see you've written. - Yours Truly

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