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Still of the Night

In the still of the night where the moon is shinning bright our imagination takes flight as the stars give way to light In the still of the night as we gaze out into the big blue sky tears of joy start to fill my eye as I take a breath and give a great sigh In the still of the night feelings of love start to flow overflow of emotions start to grow and where this will end up only you and I will ever know The still of the night can take us places unknown sending us shivering with chills down to the bone pleasurable gratification that incites me to a moan and the evening is ours in which we set the tone

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Date: 2/10/2014 10:29:00 PM
Lovely lines and I like the form....
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, so much Donna, like a year later that I'm getting back to you.
Date: 2/10/2014 6:48:00 AM
A romantic piece with a desirable result.
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/10/2014 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate the comment
Date: 2/9/2014 11:41:00 AM
Gwen an excellent love poem and I love the refrain...David
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/10/2014 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much David, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/9/2014 10:36:00 AM
Oh wow. ...I love the flow of your words. The imagery here is awesome. A touching piece indeed!!
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/10/2014 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, so glad you liked it
Date: 2/9/2014 9:10:00 AM
This is a great piece. It flows so well....Tim
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/9/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Tim, appreciate your comments

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