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Still Looking For It

lost a long time ago
still looking for it---
my missing heart




© kash poet 2012
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Placement: 8th;(March 2012)

Contest: Missing

Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Kim Merryman

March 13, 2012 at 3:41 PM

Great senryu, Kash. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

March 12, 2012 at 5:33 PM

thump, thump, thump Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 12, 2012 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Kash. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 12, 2012 at 8:26 AM

congrats Kash on a super write aned win luv.. this ones is simply amazing luv..

Black Eyed Susan

March 12, 2012 at 8:23 AM

congratulations on your win! simple, yet deep. makes me wonder what happened...

M.I.A .

March 11, 2012 at 8:51 PM

so totally get it, simple yet so true. beautiful Senryu, Kash

Charmaine Chircop

March 11, 2012 at 1:52 AM

and the poet too

Charmaine Chircop

March 11, 2012 at 1:51 AM

Ouch.. a very emotive post Kash...One which goes to my fav..Charma

Charmaine Chircop

March 11, 2012 at 1:51 AM

and the poet too

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 10, 2012 at 8:00 PM

oh .. a write of deep emotiion Kash... hope u have found that lovely heart of yours by tonight luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

March 10, 2012 at 1:35 PM

Your heart i still there, Kash, or you wouldn't be able to write so beautifully. Perhaps when you find what is missing, you'll see my memory and agility lying in the same spot. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2012 at 1:35 AM

soupmail

Ilene Bauer

March 9, 2012 at 5:53 PM

very touching!

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2012 at 3:54 PM

ahhh, Kashinath, this is sweet. you must be the tin man!!!!

Nette Onclaud

March 9, 2012 at 2:48 PM

kashi!...why do you do this to me!.. i'm speechless!.. a fav senryu that rakes my heart... stunning!... you are right about the dodoitsu; i did it at 4am, so i was half-asleep.. been having bad technical glitches here on soup, waaaah!... win it--- for sure!..:) huggs!.. hope you'll visit! :)