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Still Looking

Still looking As long as there are rhymes, Will I live if I keep time? And these concerns of lost romance; Why am I looking back to glance And beside a rivers tributary, If I pray my last Hail Mary; Will it ever come to me? Why I swim this empty sea.

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Date: 4/11/2011 7:23:00 AM
Hey Leonard! Oh that "sea", looks so empty will always has something moving somewhere below the surface. I've missed out on reading your writes, and for this I am very sorry. You haven't been sitting on your pen with the ink drying in your pocket...I've a lot of catching up to do!! Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki
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