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Still Listening

Preface: Written for my wife our 1st Christmas without Ryan. Still Listening Ryan heard me whisper, Merry Christmas to his mother. He hears Rob and Ronnie laughing, at funny stories of their brother. He hears the prayers, he hears the praise, family and friends have given. Ryan still hears everything, while he waits for us in heaven. The screams of fans in hockey rinks, every time he scored a goal. His fingers tap-tapping on the lid of a brand new can of skoal. The cymbals of his drumset, Santa brought when he was seven. Ryan can hear everything, while he waits for us in heaven. He heard our wails of anguish, the warm night of August seven, Ryan has heard everything, patiently preparing for us in heaven. So sit back, my love, and watch the boys unwrap, as the Christmas tree's still glistening. Close your eyes and whisper, "Merry Christmas, Ryan", because I'm certain he's still listening. c Copyright 2004

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Date: 12/6/2008 5:01:00 PM
tom this was very touching. It brought tears to my eyes to feel the love for Rlyan. I feel your family's loss and I want you to know that there is one more person in this world that Ryan has touched and that's me. We will all be in glory some day with all our loved ones. Have a Merry Christmas in memory of Ryan his love and legacy I know he would want that for his family just like you would or I if we were with Jesus. Very Touching Tom my prayers go out to you and your's GBU and your family.
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Date: 12/6/2008 1:22:00 PM
thanks for your honest comment, look when rap first arrived no one ever liked it as far people listening, i write about life, maybe if i wrote happy poetry this could get some comments, unfortunetly its not what i live, what do you live? are these words true? was your opinion honest?
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Date: 12/6/2008 9:26:00 AM
Once again, you have touched my heart, Tom. These poems can have a healing message....I hope they help, though, I know you won't ever forget. Blessings...Carrie
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Date: 12/6/2008 8:51:00 AM
This is so affecting and beautiful... you will always have your memories, until such time as you are re-united once more... God bless, Keith
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:01:00 AM
I hope since 2004 the holidays have become easier to deal with. I mourn your lost but happy for your anticiapation of heaven. In Christ Laurie
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Date: 12/6/2008 6:52:00 AM
So very beautiful Tom. I'm sure that our loved ones are always listening as well. Very moving tribute, sad but wonderful. God bless you and yours this holiday season, thank you for sharing this with us. Amy
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