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Wash northern lights warm Over the posed brick-a-bract Brilliant colors swarm By Robb A. Kopp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 1:15:00 PM
pretty
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed your description of how the colors of the lights "swarm." Very nice haiku, Robb! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:23:00 AM
It's a lot to say in a few words. Good sky imagery and contrasting imagery like 'posed' and 'swarm'. I did a Haiku of the sky as well if you're interested.
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