Still Determined

I’m going to break this Beak loose
Got my mind around in circles Duck Duck Goose’
Been through 
‘Life’, Milton Bradley
Speak my mind,Expressing my feelings while Genuinely showing the real me.
Have you listened to my story?
What I have faced or what I have seen.
I have had to fight through life, body left scarred inside, outside and in between.
Red headed Black sheep of tha family.
Been through the most and still hold the biggest heart yet they are still determined to break me.
Been told I wasn’t going to be it.
So, I added it to complete my outfit
Snugged it on tight to show my silhouette fit.
Been told, I was soft and weak behind the tears that fall off my cheek
But, my tears just soften the beast.
Before the pain becomes words that she regrets once they roll off the tongue as sentences when released.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/24/2020 10:04:00 PM
“Red headed black sheep” made me laugh. Welcome to another one.
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Date: 4/23/2020 7:14:00 PM
'F 'em. What's the point of life if you are not true to yourself. Keep writing girlfriend, you got the gift.
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Date: 4/22/2020 12:27:00 PM
Hello Life of Lou Poetry, never, never, never- let anyone put you down. Stand up to that person. Show that you are strong. I have done it in my childhood and I felt better doing it. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2020 5:19:00 PM
Hello Life of Lou Poetry, I will be reading mire of your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
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Life Of Lou Poetry
Date: 4/22/2020 12:43:00 PM
Hi Thank You Absolutely We should never allow a bully to out bully you.I have stories for days So I try to turn my personal experiences into poetry Yes Nice to meet you and Enjoy your day the best way you can through these crazy tines
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