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still caught in May

May is the season of Rain droplets of soft note tapping rhythm into my coat tip— tap. tip— tap. she walks with me and starlight for a silent talk midnight May is the season of Rain I watch her dance as sun sinks beneath the fence— tip— tip— tip— she blurs my memory track as he never comes back May is the season of Rain all it took was a goodbye for her to come by tip— tap. tip— tap. tap. tap.tap.tap... she's here to stay when I’m still caught in May
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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Wonderful entry for Brian. Congrats on the win
Tsai Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, Andrea <3
Hind Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Such beauty- "for her to seep through the door tip— tap. tip— tap. tap. tap.tap"
Tsai Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:56 PM
Thank you so much, Paige! I'm glad you like how I tried to capture the rhythm of rain and tear with sound. It's a new experiment, and I'm so happy you like it <3
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