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Still Breathes

Nothing left to see..
                           Ashes outline what's not there..
                                But a soul still breathes..

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Poet Destroyer A

August 16, 2012 at 6:05 AM

Yes..I like that...saint Michael...he he he... and your little dog too... epic image...luv... inoccent me...pd

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 6, 2012 at 7:23 PM

Oh wow...you never seem to amaze me...what a powerful Senryu you have penned here...love it..and I love your support...it means more than you'll ever know..INK-U-SCRIPT

Vassilis Comporozos

July 19, 2012 at 4:34 AM

A really strong poem, especially the second verse. Bravo!

Wilma Neels

July 18, 2012 at 11:53 AM

Awesome MJF :) really not much more to say about this one.. love & hugs CTH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 18, 2012 at 10:39 AM

a glorious image Michael luv with a breathtaking result ..these words are outstanding .. JG in reflective mode today ..xoxo now and forever..

Andrea Dietrich

July 17, 2012 at 10:09 PM

awesome, Micheal. I think exactly the same way.

Cindy Cayton

July 17, 2012 at 8:09 PM

sifting through the ashes, so profoundly written. God bless, Cindy

Russell Sivey

July 17, 2012 at 4:30 PM

Wow, Michael, this is truly a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed the incredible powers of your words that you so illustriously written in this write! I love the line, "Ashes outline what's not there.." this says so much, this line, what a great voice you have! Awesome Work!!