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Still a Virgin

She is my alluring… African queen; priceless, is not like all the girls I have seen. She takes me to where have never been, Sparkling scenery in my dreams, so cool and keen. I look into her eyes and what I see… fire; right within my heart flows the river of desire. A romantic race this is, my heart... refires I will give her my world, she is all I desire. Lot’s of guys come around her… toasting, Love is all she wanted so she is waiting; Looking for the man… lively and loving; Lots of girls are jealous-- she is still a virgin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/15/2011 12:30:00 AM
I can relate this to the song of the veteran Nigeria-born singer Tu-face. I know you were inspired by his songs to write this, because you used most of his wordings. So i suggest you dedicate this piece to his glory. Nice read all the same.
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:27:00 AM
Nice rhyme Adeleke, Still A Virgin-it's a good one.
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:53:00 AM
great choice of words..... well put together... nice piece indeed....
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:39:00 PM
i love this piece with all my heart my friend nice image to your poem here my friend
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:42:00 PM
This is wow! And proudly Nigerian!
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:06:00 PM
Adeleke, I hope you be still a virgin too?? My hubbie and I both were. I think it is nice to begin life that way with someone. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2010 10:07:00 AM
man, where can i find one of these girls. great write. enjoyed reading it.
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