Still a Virgin

She is my alluring… African 
queen;
priceless, is not like all the girls I 
have 
seen.
She takes me to where have 
never been,
Sparkling scenery in my dreams, 
so cool and keen.

I look into her eyes and what I 
see… fire;
right within my heart flows the 
river of desire.
A romantic race this is, my 
heart... refires
I will give her my world, she is all 
I desire.

Lot’s of guys come around her… 
toasting,
Love is all she wanted so she is  
waiting;
Looking for the man… lively and 
loving;
Lots of girls are jealous-- she is 
still a virgin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/15/2011 12:30:00 AM
I can relate this to the song of the veteran Nigeria-born singer Tu-face. I know you were inspired by his songs to write this, because you used most of his wordings. So i suggest you dedicate this piece to his glory. Nice read all the same.
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:27:00 AM
Nice rhyme Adeleke, Still A Virgin-it's a good one.
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:53:00 AM
great choice of words..... well put together... nice piece indeed....
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:39:00 PM
i love this piece with all my heart my friend nice image to your poem here my friend
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:42:00 PM
This is wow! And proudly Nigerian!
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:06:00 PM
Adeleke, I hope you be still a virgin too?? My hubbie and I both were. I think it is nice to begin life that way with someone. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2010 10:07:00 AM
man, where can i find one of these girls. great write. enjoyed reading it.
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