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Still a Virgin

She is my alluring… African 
queen;
priceless, is not like all the girls I 
have 
seen.
She takes me to where have 
never been,
Sparkling scenery in my dreams, 
so cool and keen.

I look into her eyes and what I 
see… fire;
right within my heart flows the 
river of desire.
A romantic race this is, my 
heart... refires
I will give her my world, she is all 
I desire.

Lot’s of guys come around her… 
toasting,
Love is all she wanted so she is  
waiting;
Looking for the man… lively and 
loving;
Lots of girls are jealous-- she is 
still a virgin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Okonkwo Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 12:30 AM
I can relate this to the song of the veteran Nigeria-born singer Tu-face. I know you were inspired by his songs to write this, because you used most of his wordings. So i suggest you dedicate this piece to his glory. Nice read all the same.
Benson Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Nice rhyme Adeleke, Still A Virgin-it's a good one.
George Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 11:53 AM
great choice of words..... well put together... nice piece indeed....
Chappell Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 8:39 PM
i love this piece with all my heart my friend nice image to your poem here my friend
Olofinnika Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 2:42 PM
This is wow! And proudly Nigerian!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Adeleke, I hope you be still a virgin too?? My hubbie and I both were. I think it is nice to begin life that way with someone. Luv, Andrea
Cobb Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:07 AM
man, where can i find one of these girls. great write. enjoyed reading it.
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