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Still a Dream

still a dream---
a square meal
on a round table
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 8:36 AM
like ;}
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:09 PM
or better yet, it makes me think of a "square deal" and the round table of Camelot. Those are both marvelous metaphors for that dream we all long for, Kashinath.
Kapoor Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Sad but superbly crafted, a Poem from your skilled pen Kash. Love and Best wishes ...Ravindra
Neels Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:55 PM
This is awesome Kash! You say so much with a few words.. Hope your week's been a great one thus far ;)
Neels Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:54 PM
This is awesome Kash! You say so much with a few words.. Hope your week's been a great one thus far ;)
Onclaud Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 9:37 AM
your wish for a meal is my command, kashi buddy!... splendid 'ku you spoil me with!..:) huggs!
Allen Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:38 AM
A heart full of hunger but where to find the meal. Quite a Haiku here. Huggs TLee
Allen Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:37 AM
A heart full of hunger but where to find the meal. Quite a Haiku here. Huggs TLee
Susan Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:37 AM
powerful. the implied hunger - so awful! I picture starving children, parents looking longingly at an empty table, food they can't provide... :(
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:50 AM
oohh kash this is one of the very best I have seen, wish i could write them like that!..David
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